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   On the night of Hallows Eve, dressed up like a monster.
Trick or treating for the past hour and getting all kinds of candy from sweet to sour.
Eating it proudly you notice a skull in the moon, the skull head looking like it's laughing.
You wonder why you never noticed it before, while you wonder your friends ask why
you're looking at the moon.
You respond by saying "Do you guys see a skull head in the moon?" and your friends just
laugh at you.
They say, "no, you must be seeing things."
They continue walking down the street to the next house while you stare confused at the
moon and the skull head in it.
No longer then staring at the moon for two minutes you hear screams, you turn around
and your friends are gone.
You look around for you friends, but they're nowhere in site.
The screams of your friends continue echoing thought the street and woods.
You look back at the moon and the skull head fades away laughing.
The laughter of the fading skull sends chills down your spine.
Your friends are still screaming and you feel hopeless and weak.
Looking around trying to find your friends, you eventually find them but, you're pale white
from the fear inside of you to say anything.
You just stare as your friends lay there nearly dead.
Struck in the head, arm cut off and gashes in them, they use their last breath to say “run
while you still can.”
You look at them with huge eyes as they close theirs.

You wake up inside someone’s house the next day, you’re all scratched up and bruised.
            Do you know what happened that night?
                      I do.
( Ok.. i thought of this the one night while searching through my wallpapers and found a wallpaper that was a moon with a skull in it. This poem is spose to be scary... i tried ^^;; )
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yorikitsune Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2004  Student Digital Artist
That poem scares me... O.o;

Lol, I get scared easily xD
misakisuzuhara Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2004  Student Artist
freaaaky, congrats ^_^, i really like it :hug:
yamimarita Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2004
Freaky Deaky Angel-chan @_@ ouiiiiiii :hug: scary scary! I might have to go to bed with Jesse Bear and Andy the Monkey, not to mention Eric my stuffed Pup dog lol
kingdomheartsfan Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2004
mirokuglomper Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2004
o___o;; Holy. Cow. That. So. Freaked. Me. Out. xO;; This is suuuuch a cool poem. It gave me chills. Very very cool! :heart:
kingdomheartsfan Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2004
it was ment to send chills X3
kurama-kuronue Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2003
Oooo... creepy kool ^^
DarkAlmasy Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2003
Oooooo! That's excellent M' Dear!
kingdomheartsfan Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2003
oh and i forgot to say that i'm not sure if this goes in dark or poetry ^^;; my mom said it was a good poem so ^^;; DON'T KILL ME!!
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